[ovs-dev] [PATCH] ovs-vsctl: Add details to documentation for "emer-reset" command.

[Jesse Gross]

On Fri, Jun 18, 2010 at 3:47 PM, Ben Pfaff <blp at nicira.com> wrote:
>
>  Reset the configuration into a clean state.  This will clear the
>  configuration of items likely to have been configured by a manager.
> -The core networking configuration will be left as is.
> +The core networking configuration is left as is.
> +.IP
> +In more detail, this command does the following:
>

Can we just say what it does instead of describing it once and then
describing it again in more detail?


> +.RS
> +.IP \(bu
> +Deconfigures all OpenFlow controllers (as with \fBdel\-controller\fR)
> +and OVSDB servers.
> +.IP \(bu
> +Deconfigures SSL (as with \fBdel\-ssl\fR).
> +.IP \(bu
> +Deconfigures and deletes all port mirroring and NetFlow and sFlow
> +configuration.
>

That's a lot of ands.


> +.IP \(bu
> +Removes all \fBother\-config\fR keys from all database records, except
> +that \fBother-config:hwaddr\fR is preserved if it is present in a
> +Bridge record.
>

Seems like there are a bunch of filler words here (could drop the first all,
maybe some of the thats and its, etc.).

It looks fine, just reads a little rough to me.
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